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To leave all that you know behind
To start what they call a new life,
To screw it up within just a week,
Is easier than you would think.

To go from one amazing low,
To another humongous high,
Can make you feel so full,
Can make you want to die.
©2005-2009 ~blackpetal
:iconblackpetal:

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Written this morning. I know it's not that great but I was suffering from 'need to write poetry really quickly no matter how crap it is' syndrome. For those of you who can't guess, this snippet is about how I've found the change in life so far; the last line is not exact...only really had those thoughts when simultaneously miserable and drunk, so no need to panic, those of you who would.

I may put up some more detailed poems on life here, especially about some of the guys, and one in particular :D :blush:.

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:iconwarpandweft:
well I'm being made to appreciate amateur poetry by creative writing society... post more :D
:iconblackpetal:
i need to write more first! :P

--
You're everything I long and hope for,
You're everything I want to be.
:iconwarpandweft:
whatcha doing on here then? chop chop!
:iconribenacreature:
Slavedriver! ;p

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These words that fall
From my lips through the tips
Of my fingers and curl
Into letters and words
They form a dream
In copperplate ink
They conjure a shade
From the depths of my world
:iconribenacreature:
You okay, hun? If you want me to call for a chat, let me know. :hug:

--
These words that fall
From my lips through the tips
Of my fingers and curl
Into letters and words
They form a dream
In copperplate ink
They conjure a shade
From the depths of my world

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